BLINK OF AN EYE

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BLINK OF AN EYE

To feel like death is coming for me, to know is what hurts me the most inside. For all the pain, and all the confusion, is why it makes sense in my mind, to feel of why death is coming for me is always pondering on when. Will I be ready when death takes me away from my life that I awake everyday, for maybe I am only in a dream, but it is a nightmare. I feel that I am dead anyway. To scared each moment that passes, just waiting, just wondering is this the day. Or am I just in another awful dream that never seems to end. Is this my time, my end? So mixed up with all these thoughts make me think if now at this very second, that these feelings I have are so unexplainable for just imagine, my fear. It makes you wonder as it makes me. Everyone in this life may already be dead, yet that is something unanswered. In just one blink of an eye brings this fear that is always running through my body, each time this feeling grows more painful. For now every breath I take I fear it  may be my last, for I know it is coming, though when is the question. For it may already has, and I am stuck in this dark place...

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Chaos128 commented on BLINK OF AN EYE

12-07-2010

You've given emotional expression to a circumstance in which you are not alone. There's no way to estimate the innumerable people find themselves in a troubled state of mind, and there are as many reasons as there are people. Give yourself a chance to gain a little strength in the now. It might come in handy when it come time to face the then. Courageously straightforward thoughts.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

bettina’s Poems (25)

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My Blood Shed 1
MY PAIN 1
BLINK OF AN EYE 1
A QUOTE 0
THOUGHTS 0
BREAKING WALLS 0
TURN 0
* UNTITLED * 0
* UNTITLED * 0
PRESSURE 0
THIS 0
BROKEN 0
ETERNITY 0
FALLING 0
FEAR 0
THE MIRROR 0
IT 0
MY BEAUTY 0
REFLECTION 0
PAINFUL THOUGHT 0
KNOWING 0
NOTHING 0
AWAKENING 0
FORSAKEN INNOCENCE 0
REALITY 0