Can She Walk Away ?

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Can She Walk Away ?

When she says I love you she does, but this with him is not enough. She needs someone she can lean on, someone she can count on too, someone who will hold her and let her cry when she needs it. Yes he is there sometimes, for that she is grateful to him. But she needs someone there all time and that he can not do for her. He tells her he loves her with all his heart, that she can believe in him, she is there when he need's someone. Where is he when she need's someone, too? The time has come for her to let go, never to expect him to care again. People may come and people may go, but her love for him will never end whether she stays or goes. The question now is can she walk away from him forever and leave behind the only one she has ever loved so much and never look back ?

Sept 30th 2009

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sunnah3 commented on Can She Walk Away ?

10-19-2009

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cmlestrade commented on Can She Walk Away ?

10-19-2009

Well if I was her I would not walk away, maybe because Granny always told us a bird in the hand is worth more than any other nest you may find in the bush. i guess that was her way of saying the grass is always greener.This is a good poem about the pain of being wanted and needed unconditionally. Does that exist. i don't know but this loves comes very close.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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