candy

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    • Cultures come to conquer and their gods applaud.

    Poem Commentary

    shadows accomodate

    curves,

    and in light you'll find-

    the softest rock is the mind,

    but it's hardened in time.

    candy

    Often

    Cold hands search empty pockets

    For the softest

    Rock

     

    Standing

    At an open doorway

    Thoughts tiptoe into

    Darkness

     

    Into her,

    Melting like chocolate,

    Every want

    Hardens

     

    Light

    Cries against

    Lonely pillow

    Breaking

     

    Breath

    Molests her quiet

    Denials in

    Silence.

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    mamasan commented on candy

    11-10-2009

    If words were rationed you would not be daunted. You would still turn out the best darn poems written in austerity but rich with meaning and subtle music. The more I read the more I become hooked on this kind of writing.
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    SavVySam commented on candy

    08-01-2009

    Truly...Tension and dramatic urgency are magnified by your use of brevity. Good Job!
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    FindingJune commented on candy

    07-24-2009

    Breath Molests her quiet Denials in Silence Stunning! I am a fan of brevity. You have mastered it. Very well done.
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    kadinan commented on candy

    06-25-2009

    i love this! i've been reading the rest of your poems and you are an amazing writer in my opinion.
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    BDIsernhagen commented on candy

    06-05-2009

    "searching for the softest rock..." wow, that's a great line, really true, a lesser of two evil's thing.
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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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