Cold

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    Cold


    At early dusk, we beg and plee with ourselves not to wake, because we know how our bones will ache. The tempeture dropped two below,
    and you hear your wreched neighbor blowing his driveways snow.
    All you can think of is your wind blown hair, thinking twice about fixing it extra nice.
    Contemplating on having your work delivered, in fear of the constant shiver.
    Iced over rivers and hybernating critters, Is all that is around, I'm in my bed safe and sound, comfort in my warm blanket and pillow, I'm not gonna freeze my ass off like that weeping willow...

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    WordSlinger commented on Cold

    07-05-2009

    Amazing, few people realize, how the willow tree is naked in the winter, They to curl in a ball and keep warm. I bet this poem flys over peoples heads. But I git it, the picture even adds to it.

    underdog65 commented on Cold

    06-04-2009

    Seemed to really have an inner voice. I liked it. You could really tell, where the poet was coming from.

    lightcourier commented on Cold

    05-04-2009

    funny! thanks!

    AZsbiggestfan commented on Cold

    02-18-2009

    yes baby you had a great idea i cant wait to see where this takes us in our writting. just another avenue for us to grow together and to touch each others souls

    vixyzhalo commented on Cold

    02-18-2009

    I like how you tied it up at the end. :O) made me giggle.nice write.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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