Conscious

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    I wanted to show the battle of ones self against there mind

    Conscious

    Let me save you from you terror.

    but then I surely die for ever!

    If you take a chance, I can garentee more.

    But then I'll just fall on to the floor!

    I ask for trust.

    Then you are asking for to much!

    I'll help you get away.

    I don't care what you say!

    You use to be so brave.

    That's till I dug my grave!

    Your eyes have gone hollow.

    Thats because there is no dream to follow!

    I'll aways be here to help you find your way.

    I'll always turn you away!

    Then goodnight I shall say.

    ...I'll miss you either way...

     

     

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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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