Universe

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    I felt a very strong pull and passion of the outer world and I understood it in my sleep but when i woke i lost it all and i wanted to try and force it back out.

    Universe

    Laying on my bed

    Staring out the window

    Hand pressed against the cold glass

    Reading the sky like story thats almost dead

    So far below

    As times flys pass

     

    Eyes press toward the sky

    Thinking of whats beyond the stars

    Wishing I would understand in time

    Some unknow universe only caught on radar

     

    Its hard to sleep knowing theres somuch more

    I want to be a part of it all

    Something new and diverse

    But sleep begins to lore

    Into deep sleep I fall

    With greeting from the universe

     

    The secrets I'm told

    But when I wake

    I lose all my gold

    Once agian wish to take

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    AlisRed commented on Universe

    04-27-2011

    This is still one of my fav. poems of mine
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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