contoll

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  • Confusion

    contoll

    3/31/09

    controll

    Im right here closer than ever, opportunity is knocking,
    but the fog of the ciggerettes keeps me from seeing,on the other side.
    but to put the jack down, feels like dieing inside, when whole time my soul is dieing.
    contantly complaining on why my life, is like this or like that.
    thats because i keep holdin on to things that be holdin me back.
    i cant really believe,if i keep doing the things that hender me.
    all the Faith in the world does nothing, without works.
    works is proof of me believeing.
    everyday a circle of lies. lieing to myself,thinking i need no help
    when hole time i really do.
    ide rather be locked up in a zoo. that way i cant do,
    what my body wants to.
    self controll is hard when you have no controll,
    i lost it, when i thought i could do it own my own.

    PLEASE TELL ME WHERE I WENT WRONG?

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    frog commented on contoll

    08-29-2009

    This is a very powerful poem. A lot of truths are in this write.

    DeepEclipse commented on contoll

    04-13-2009

    I feel you man. Being on your own and shit. To some of us it's all we know. We trust few, we open up rarely and we live the pattern of "self-survival." Matthew 7:7 states to "keep seeking and you will find." Best hope to you finding man. Peace

    Bethane1978 commented on contoll

    04-11-2009

    I Know How You Feel

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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    Jesus is with you!!! 1
    Faith 2
    REASONS WHY???? 1
    THE REALIEST LOVE!!!! 1
    YOU TELL ME POETRY??? 1
    wat chu cant see 0
    to tha top.... 0
    FREE 0
    come up... 1
    live ur lyfe!!! 1
    EYES,CAN SEE. 0
    ON THE WAY TO THE TOP... 0
    ONLY YOU KNOW YOU.... 3
    NO SORROWS... 1
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    LIVE TO LOVE.... 1
    not the only one..... 0
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    TAKE A RIDE!!!! 1
    time... 4
    in's and out's 1
    never give up!!! 1
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    Self... 2
    Rain!!! 2
    HeartLess!!!! 1
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    UntiTled... 2
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