Patience!!!

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Patience!!!

Patience!!!

Sitting in the breezeway, waitin for a breeze,

I thought of you, and a breeze came thru.

Justifying patience, and that life is true.

I want so much on my own time,

Instead of just waiting,

Sumone to complete me, instead of just hating,

Birds flying together, joined in flight,

I want my companion, that seems to be the hardest fight.

So just like the breeze I waited for, that soon came thru.

I just need to be patient with love,

Cuz that will soon come too.

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starfox115 commented on Patience!!!

01-29-2010

you have so much potential mate. this is an awesome poem. the message was clearly stated and sent without me having to read it again. great

RyneishaB commented on Patience!!!

08-03-2009

Yes...Yes...Yes...i love this...its so true in due time :) and when love finds you best believe it was worth the wait!!!!! great job loved it!

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

frankson03’s Poems (40)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Witch WAy.... 1
Jesus is with you!!! 1
Faith 2
REASONS WHY???? 1
THE REALIEST LOVE!!!! 1
YOU TELL ME POETRY??? 1
wat chu cant see 0
to tha top.... 0
FREE 0
come up... 1
live ur lyfe!!! 1
EYES,CAN SEE. 0
ON THE WAY TO THE TOP... 0
ONLY YOU KNOW YOU.... 3
NO SORROWS... 1
struggles...!
!!
1
LIVE TO LOVE.... 1
not the only one..... 0
Patience!!! 2
TAKE A RIDE!!!! 1
time... 4
in's and out's 1
never give up!!! 1
lost!!! 4
Self... 2
Rain!!! 2
HeartLess!!!! 1
peace!!! 1
UntiTled... 2
God rules everything around me.!!!! 1
let your heart speak!!! 5
wrong road!!! 5
within!!! 2
it not me!!! 7
the soul. 3
143!!! 2
fight 3
contoll 3
real love!!!! 3
History 2