UntiTled...

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UntiTled...

The road to my life is closing fast,

The only thing I have to blame,

Is my dying past.

Disiccions I have made, messed up my life,

Caused my gurl and I to live with strife.

All I want is for things to be right.

I can forget in the day,

But remember all at night.

I hate my life.

My body and my heart are at steady fight.

Only person I have to blame is me.

“ if I liked it, then I should have put a ring on it”

I didn’t

And now she’s free.

She has the charges,

But im the one who’s locked up mentally.

Kharma is real, things never go unnoticed,

Whats done in the dark ,

The light will surly show it.

Have a job, that only required me togo to  school,

6 credit hours, couldn’t do it,

Im steady playin the role of a fool.

Moms said, no government job, no house to live in,

Now they are asking for my grades,

So I guess im movin.

For sum reason, I cant deal with lifes hurts,

No complaints, no worries,

Rather end up in a hurst, but whats that worth?

Nothing, but an easy way out.

And that truly not what lifes about.

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DeepEclipse commented on UntiTled...

06-17-2009

Damn this was painful. It's like there's no way out. I relate too. Body and heart at steady fight, and I can't seem to please anybody. Keep writin it out man.

frankson03

06/17/2009

i apprieciate, man life has been real hard lately, and i can tell thru the words of my writings, i have a wuestion for you tho, as i keep writing, will the answer to my problems flow out on paper?

RyneishaB commented on UntiTled...

06-17-2009

This poem really did me in because i know people like this...and how you look at it i wished others did as well...life is a struggle but we can make it...dont worry about your past just think from here on out, make things right!!!! Great Poem:)

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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Jesus is with you!!! 1
Faith 2
REASONS WHY???? 1
THE REALIEST LOVE!!!! 1
YOU TELL ME POETRY??? 1
wat chu cant see 0
to tha top.... 0
FREE 0
come up... 1
live ur lyfe!!! 1
EYES,CAN SEE. 0
ON THE WAY TO THE TOP... 0
ONLY YOU KNOW YOU.... 3
NO SORROWS... 1
struggles...!
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1
LIVE TO LOVE.... 1
not the only one..... 0
Patience!!! 2
TAKE A RIDE!!!! 1
time... 4
in's and out's 1
never give up!!! 1
lost!!! 4
Self... 2
Rain!!! 2
HeartLess!!!! 1
peace!!! 1
UntiTled... 2
God rules everything around me.!!!! 1
let your heart speak!!! 5
wrong road!!! 5
within!!! 2
it not me!!! 7
the soul. 3
143!!! 2
fight 3
contoll 3
real love!!!! 3
History 2