lost!!!

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  • Lost Love

    lost!!!

    The mother of my child, set in her ways, wants me to change.

    How can I change, if she not willing to stay.

    How can we be soul mates, to the point, when she mad, she runs away.

    Y does she accuse me of playin sum game.

    My heart is on the line, don’t have time for the next stage.

    Either u love me or you don’t, my name is heart always, so stop fakin the funk.

    Five years, of back and fourth behavior. U wanted a ring,  but I told you later.

    Now your heart is set of, removing me, from your mind.

    Sum things you have control over. But love last a lifetime.

    How can I feel sumthing so strong. But u as a women. Don’t wanna hold on.

    What made you wanna be with me. it was those feeling u couldn’t express, that made us unity.

    love is no feeling nore emotion, it decisions u make without choices. No order or structure, to it.

    You just think of me, and just do it.

    I have sacrifice my life for you. And at the end of five, you straight play me for a fool.

    Playin in this game without a controller, I cant win.

    You want this fairy tale life, without strugglin.

    Lets just be real, and start paying attention, to the sign within.

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    FiloRozzell commented on lost!!!

    07-14-2009

    My man stay true to yourself and if patience is what you need she will understand or say bye. Love is a compromise and some women are real impatient with marriage but you must assure yourselt that she is who she show and that you are who you show also. Show the real, I loved this poem bruh I feel it literally.

    candace12011 commented on lost!!!

    07-14-2009

    very interesting poem, depicts a real situation, i like it

    RyneishaB commented on lost!!!

    07-13-2009

    Wow i really like this one...it shows a lot of emotions...love the words you chose to use...very well said!!!!

    GucciGurl commented on lost!!!

    07-08-2009

    This is very good.I like it becasue i know what it is like to be there. I finally said I must look for the signs that tell me what to do. The signs are all around us but do we really want to see them. That is the real question.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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    Jesus is with you!!! 1
    Faith 2
    REASONS WHY???? 1
    THE REALIEST LOVE!!!! 1
    YOU TELL ME POETRY??? 1
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    to tha top.... 0
    FREE 0
    come up... 1
    live ur lyfe!!! 1
    EYES,CAN SEE. 0
    ON THE WAY TO THE TOP... 0
    ONLY YOU KNOW YOU.... 3
    NO SORROWS... 1
    struggles...!
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    LIVE TO LOVE.... 1
    not the only one..... 0
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    TAKE A RIDE!!!! 1
    time... 4
    in's and out's 1
    never give up!!! 1
    lost!!! 4
    Self... 2
    Rain!!! 2
    HeartLess!!!! 1
    peace!!! 1
    UntiTled... 2
    God rules everything around me.!!!! 1
    let your heart speak!!! 5
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    within!!! 2
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    the soul. 3
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