NO SORROWS...

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NO SORROWS...

Today is really a good day, sorrow, of the past our slowly goin away, been gone for a min, cuz I had to become a man of business, an live as a witness, grew up without a father, to guide me, mother stood tall an did her job proudly, no offence (nonetakin) but a women cant raise a man, who wants to learn on his own, I went to the streets, an my that my home, taught me a lot about me, had me see right from wrong, thought so long I had no conscience , but urry lilbit on nonsence I ened up convicted an feelin bad about acts I participated in. It was fun while it lasted, but everything with a start comes to an end, living for 24 years, an my lifes just begins, happy I am to get another chance to live my dream, to be a good witness for the people to see.

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DeepEclipse commented on NO SORROWS...

01-28-2010

Indeed. A boy needs a father. Or a father figure. My moms is both my parents. I always say a dad would of slowed me down, perhaps thats just my more cynical nature getting the better of me. A full circle poem. Proving that every seed must first go through the dirt before bloom. The structure it is written in makes it kinda hard to read for me, but it was a journey of good reality none the less. Hope the road continues to favor you. Peace

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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