time...

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time...

just a flash of light, and then I am there,

just a breath of air, to see clear,

just a lil bit of rain, to have feeling,

I need to be king, and live without reason.

I just wanna be successful,

Life without words, means no life at all,

Life without action, means no life at all.

I need to be above the rest, who feel that they are the best.

I have been told to be equal with those around me,

But I cant be them, its me that found me.

He above made me for a reason. And thats not to live the life

Of the next man achievements,

But to live a life of my own, have my own,

Own my own. Make my own.

Not to live in this earth wanting more,

But content with what I have.

My destiny is my dream, I see when I close my eyes,

Its reality to me now, Im bout to shine.

Realize the talent you have, b4 u outta of time .

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1990lh commented on time...

07-19-2009

a great poem i love the message and how u betrayed your poem. your words r true and powerful. people r always worried about what someone elese has or can do but never stop and take alook at what they can do.great poem keep writing

GucciGurl commented on time...

07-16-2009

Great work. You must always push for the best. It is ok to be content with what you have but always try to be the king of your castle

optimistic commented on time...

07-16-2009

Very well written you seem to have a push for the means of owning and living your dream, I to have this ambition one day things will push harder one day, keep living above the standard great write.

jademelissa74 commented on time...

07-16-2009

Wow! I must say this is one of your best here. You manage to express yourself nicely. Great job! Keep on writing!

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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