Crazy

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  • minigirl695
  • is having dilemma that no one can even think of.

Poem Commentary

Yea....I have an obsession with fantasy creatures like vampires and werewolves and such =D

Crazy

So when the time comes,

Will you be able to decide whether our choices were wrong or right?

 

What if the choices we made, were not by us at all?

What if, just what if, someone else decided to choose for us.

 

And that choice made the change of our life?

No, not one of those, miracle moments of a lifetime.

 

More like, the last time you will ever lose yourself, and be yourself ever again.

One that made you a totally different person, yet still the same.

 

Okay, so I sound crazy, but everyone has their crazy sides.

All I'm trying to say is that, I've experienced this.

 

And I don't know if it was a right choice, or a wrong one.

For one, I didn't make it, and two, it benefit the rest of my life.

 

But that's just it, the rest of my life, will last for decades and centuries to come.

Never thought you'd ever meet one huh?

 

Didn't think we existed?

Well we do.

 

So when anyone asks if you ever met anyone interesting.

You can say, "Yeah. I met a vampire"

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keithrberryjr commented on Crazy

08-06-2009

I enjoyed this.It made me laugh.I really like how you composed it and hinted at the main point but waited until the end to give what it was.Great job

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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