Alone

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  • Loneliness
    • minigirl695
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    I wrote this when my mother made me move to Indiana about two years ago. We only stayed for about 6 months because of the weather before we moved back to California. But yea, here is how I felt.

    Alone

     I feel alone,
    Lost in a new world.
    Everywhere I turn,
    I see a new face.
    I hate this new world,
    I hate this new place.

    Alone is where I stand,
    Alone is where I fall.
    Unless there is some way,
    I can get back home.

    I feel all alone,
    And alone is where I'll fall.
    Everywhere I turn,
    There is no way home.
    I hate this new world,
    And it's telling me to go back home.

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    keithrberryjr commented on Alone

    08-06-2009

    Nice way of capturing your emotions of a new move and new place.Its always hard to leave somewhere you called home and be expected to start again.Great Job
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