Deceiver

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    • minigirl695
    • is having dilemma that no one can even think of.

    Deceiver

    A pain, a pleasure.

    So deep, so bold.

    From a lust so hot,

    Or a heart so cold.

     

    Can heal, can bleed,

    So fast, so thick.

    Flowing out the veins,

    Cleaned with a lick.

     

    You think, you act,

    So quick, so smart.

    But through your head,

    Flew a dart.

     

    Believe me here,

    Believe me now.

    I will deceive you.

    Don't ask how.

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    hoth2o commented on Deceiver

    08-06-2009

    You certainly have a way with words my friend. look forward to reading more of your work.
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    minigirl695

    08/06/2009

    =) I appreciate the comments hoth2o. I will do the honor of reading your poems good sir =) ~{@ Lia Cake @}~

    keithrberryjr commented on Deceiver

    08-06-2009

    You have a great way with words.Even phrases as simple as these can turn into a great poem by your hand.
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    alexan commented on Deceiver

    08-06-2009

    i don't know what tosay anymore, its like when i read your poems, i fall in hard, i can't take my eyes off of them
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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