Epiphany.

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    This is why you shouldnt talk yourself into things. Shouldnt stretch out a good time. Lesson learned.

    Epiphany.

    The day i met you i seen right through you.

    Dont think iv ever had that experiance before,

    We clicked right then and there and by the end of the night we lay content on the floor,

    Listening to music and sharing each thought,

    things we loved, memories of the past, things weve bought,

    i remember feeling at ease in your presence, until i was close to your touch,

    i could feel the goosebumps on my skin, butterflies in my stomach, and the pull from your eyes was way to much,

    my skin tingled and my mind went blank, i watched your lips moving and the lines of your face,

    i wanted closer, but i didnt know how, until you kissed me and we couldnt slow down.

    your kiss starting lightly as if you werent quite sure, so kissing you back gave permission so you gave much much more,


    you lightly traced the curves of my body and sent chill bumps down my spine, i could feel the heat coming from your body, and electricity exploding from mine,

    i could feel your desire for me the way you would tighten your embrace, your hands traveling my body and caressing my face,

    thats been over a year ago and i can still feel it to this day, everytime where together this night always replays,

    and even though i never gave you a chance to be that something special in my life, i want you to know you are, weve been best friends since then and now look where we are,

    you know my weakness now and my strengths, we have fought alot of battles not one i would replace,

    im ready to take the next step with you, to be by your side, to give you what you wanted, to let my past lie,

    iv loved my best friend from the very beginning, iv been so stubborn in the admitting,

    but your everything im looking for and i suppose you always were how blinded i was to the fact that the whole time you were my cure,

    there isnt a person i trust more then you, and when im having a problem your the first one i run too,

    your always there to listen to matter how small, and every problem iv been through you have helped with them all,

    you have been so patient with me and let me find my way to you, im so thankful to have you in my life...im finally ready to be with you.




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    Hampton commented on Epiphany.

    09-22-2009

    Your writing skills are excellent and your ability to express your thoughts leaves little doubt where you stand.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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