Everything shone bright

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Everything shone bright

I met her in the night, where her eyes were the only visible light.
Her smile was so bright, and her beauty was intact. The way she laughed, the way she wailed. It all stabbed me in the heart like a digger. But it was like nothing I've ever felt before.

          I met her in the night, where the stars were so bright, 
          And the only sound I could hear was the beating of her heart,
          Going louder and louder. The only thing I could see was her
          Standing by my side and I couldn't explain the burning feeling I had
              Inside.

I met her in the night, where the night sky opened in half. And a special light shone from above when she said "Hi", telling me that she was the one chosen for me. The emotion I had inside was so much that it hurts, but it was a happy one.

I met her in the night, where everything shone bright.

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kpeery09 commented on Everything shone bright

03-06-2010

Very Nice, and trust me I know how it is when you first meet someone who you like and you instantly feel love, its a wonderful feeling to have that it is.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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