Evil Love Lost

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    This Poem is really long, and I am proud of the length as I should be! This poem switches from first person view to third person view and back. When I start at "Even as she beckons to you" and end at "You hated to the core", that's all third person view! I have to say that this is one of my longest poems yet. I am pretty sure that I will be coming up with new ideas for a poem, but since my creative well is running dry, it's time I took a break and let it fill bake up! I don't want to waste all of what's in my mind! That's way to valuable!

    Evil Love Lost

     I could feel the could as you touch me
    The evil as you touched me
    The anger and hatred as you pulled me close
    The thing you long for the most
    Even as she beckons you
    Her lover not once more
    You cling to the life
    You hated to the core
    But now, as I think about it
    Don't you envy me?
    Walking among the living?
    Almost living care free?
    You walk along the Earth
    Refusing your fate
    Invisible to all eyes
    If I were not once your lover
    Close to the earth as air
    Curling towards me; even in the mist
    You would be lost within the silver
    Even if I wanted you so close
    My Coldness hurted even me
    But the words are true
    I do not want you close
    For you are no longer living
    As you approach
    Pulling me close
    Something yearns for this
    But I do not
    I want to say
    To send you on your way
    But one thing sprangs to mind
    But I don't want to say it
    I don't want to say goodbye
    It hurts to much
    As if you since my fear
    And also my hesitation
    You speak words so meaningful
    But in a voice not your own
    "The reason is Hurts so much to Seperate
    "Is because our souls  are connected
    "By the bond that had harnessed us
    "Once belonging to our hearts
    "Now strangling our souls
    "A bond that can't be broken
    "Only moved back to it's originla place
    "So we are linked forever
    "By a greater Power
    "So I, and later you
    "May rest upon this planet
    "While living on another"
    You will live in Peace!
    And so will I!
    When I hear that your soul won't disappear
    I had said what I had want not said
    "Thus, May Heaven be whitness
    "Bestow upon you such kind words
    "I love you and nothing less
    "But if the sky was to fall
    "Beyond Heaven I'll be sure
    "That you are the first and last thing on my mind"
    You came to me
    So I could feel the couldness as you touched me
    The evil as you now kissed me
    The anger and hatred as you pulled me close
    And the thing you longed for the most
    And even as I beckon to you
    My lover not once more
    You cling to the life
    You surely hated to the core
    Only because you wanted to hear words
    From your lover no more
    And as Heaven rings its purple, yellow, pink bell
    Your next words sent my heart straight to hell
    And left about and empty shell
    "Before I go
    "Let me tell you
    "How much I love you
    "For one last time"
    Before I could ask
    You exploded with such light
    Never to be seen again by Human sight

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