You Don't Know...

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    This is deep feeling. Even though I am young, my voice is stronger than most and I live up to it. I am strong in the things I write, even though some of them are utter nonsense.

    You Don't Know...

    You don't know how another person feels
           Unless you tell them How you feel
                    So I let you know now: I love you very much
                               No one can ever take such a place in my heart
                                          'Cause it all belongs to you

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    arronpalmer commented on You Don't Know...

    10-20-2010

    In its simplicity, this poem yields so much. At times, it bears well to be direct, and this is exactly that, but is so with class. Nice work.

    yasminerules

    10/20/2010

    thank you so much for youre comment!

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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