FEELINGS

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    FEELINGS

     theres life in water
    theres life on land
    theres love above
    above the cold world
    that i cannot understand

    You want me to stay
    you want me to go
    but i make the final decisions
    for now on i am laying low

    I cant stand not hating you
    I cant stand not liking you.

    The things that were said.
    The things that we did
    could never compare
    what i felt towards you

    I moved on though
    I see you walk the halls
    though i look away
    i dont know what to feel
     
    the end of us is near
    to all who understand
    it is OVER.


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    Tyme commented on FEELINGS

    04-19-2011

    I wish i could like this 5 times over. Your opening stanza is so profound. There is soooo much jam-packed and crammed; stuffed in that statement! "I cant stand not hating you I cant stand not liking you." This is an unusual line in that most people feel bad for hating people. Here, this person is mad at themselves for actually liking someone! This is good. Keep writing.
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