Forgive Me

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    I wrote this a few days after my best friend Oscar Snowden died of a seizure. His death came exactly a month and a day following 9/11, it was very hard for me we were like brother and sister. The really weird thing is we were born the same day same year trippy born thousands of miles apart but l moved 3 blocks away from him. I remember that day like yesterday the pain is still there and I miss him dearly but he is in a better place now and for that I am happy.

    Forgive Me

    I never knew it was our last day.
    I was wrong to let time float away.
    Forgive Me


    I can't say any goodbye's just pray we'll meet again .
    I had a feeling something was wrong .
    I prayed the feeling wouldn't last long.
    I guess I was wrong for guessing.
    Forgive Me


    I am no less a friend as the rest ,
    as you were laid for eternal rest.
    I always loved you the best .
    I can't say any goodbye's but,
    FORGIVE ME

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    marxred commented on Forgive Me

    08-24-2009

    very nice. you take us and remind us of how precious life is. thank you dennis
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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