Getting Through

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A peice with haunting eloquence.

Getting Through

 

"I want to be where you are"

"But you are"

Whispers through static currents,

Pondering the chemistry, of us,

In solitude a prayer to you,

Through layers, indifferent attitudes,

Love ministered, me wandering,

Endured frantic prayers,

Static currents whisper through:

"We're rare"

and "Your where I want to be"

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Teardrops commented on Getting Through

01-03-2011

a cry to be accepted great write and haunting in a way Marie

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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