My Actress

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My Actress

 

 

 

 

 

Fooling foolish time,

Rewind her racing mind,

In the heat of her hypocracy,

A scene is set,

 

Entertaining trees,

Say the least,

For the sake of the wounded,

Save her needs,

 

She's an actress,

She's an actress,

And I think that we're entrenched,

In love's choreographed magnificence,

And it seems theres nothing she can do,

Stumbles when her scene mate losses cue,

And as the crowd becomes aware,

She leaves them with dead air,

 

She's an actress,

She's an actress and I love her,

 

Words that make your day,

Well she don't play that way,

Even laughing lies,

She's a looker, boots aside,

 

She's looking good,

Ackward stairs sent back,

With hateful glairs,

She's kind of scary,

 

These weary city nights,

Well she's on her way,

Dressed with skill, prepaired,

Pick-up lines tonight, thats alright,

 

Shes an actress,

Shes an actress,

And I think that she gets bored,

Of the way the stories told,

And it seems theres nothing she can do,

Her scene mate lost his cue,

And so she stubles through,

The crowd stands up to cheer,  she reaches for a beer

 

She's an actress,

She's an actress,

And she simply stole the show

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ginga commented on My Actress

01-06-2011

catharss, I like the way this actress is portrayed. Especially because she seeems to have a really great facade and one day may have to let it all show through. ginga

tenderpoison commented on My Actress

01-05-2011

it seems a little love/hate - is she always on the stage? I enjoyed the phrasing - good write :)

weirdlittlekc commented on My Actress

01-04-2011

Very vivid, I really love it. Its not really my style but I couldn't stop reading it :)

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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