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Fashioning a disguise from temporary goodbyes,
Visited my funeral today, caught a glimpse of you, then walked away.
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- catharss101
- Wishes more peple would read my work.
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MindNumbing commented on Saved
01-07-2011
- I'm fascinated by this and the power that's packed into these two short lines. Sometimes brevity is best, and this is a perfect example. Nicely done.
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01-06-2011
- Certainly a dark yet evocative poem. I like the mood of this one,. ginga
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01/06/2011
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tenderpoison commented on Saved
01-05-2011
- just checking huh? clever. very brief - but it lingers.
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BrokenHeart2009 commented on Saved
01-04-2011
- I like how the metaphore plays out through your words. It can mean more than one thing or be taken in more than one way.
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