Go with me

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    Go with me

         Poetry
    Go with me 
    To my place
    Behind the face
    Of our lives
    We can annalyze
    While we sanitize
    Negative moods
    And amuse
    Thr positive views
    We can hide
    In pockets of time
    Clamshells of days
    When the sky
    Was smokey
    From the fires
    In our hearts
    Lets run
    To other worlds
    Colorful sparkles
    Of another life form
    This is poetry
    Go with me... 

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    wiskeygirl5090 commented on Go with me

    10-23-2012

    I like this simple and beautiful what a way to ask a gift you have to go with you
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    Diffuse commented on Go with me

    10-21-2012

    "When the sky was smokey from the fires in our hearts". and the metres. Creative, masterful.
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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