Go with me


Go with me

Go with me 
To my place
Behind the face
Of our lives
We can annalyze
While we sanitize
Negative moods
And amuse
Thr positive views
We can hide
In pockets of time
Clamshells of days
When the sky
Was smokey
From the fires
In our hearts
Lets run
To other worlds
Colorful sparkles
Of another life form
This is poetry
Go with me... 

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wiskeygirl5090 commented on Go with me


I like this simple and beautiful what a way to ask a gift you have to go with you

Diffuse commented on Go with me


"When the sky was smokey from the fires in our hearts". and the metres. Creative, masterful.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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