Realm

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  • Life

    Realm

    A realm of my own
    Crystals and stones
    Fossils and bones
    Tones of truth
    A personell sanctuary
    Where I come
    To watch the shine
    My sliver of time
    A cave of my youth
    Built of whispers
    The vices of god... 

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    Diffuse commented on Realm

    10-21-2012

    I fail to get a large flash in my imagination of the image you wish to create here. BUt again I think something is still incomplete, All that is above is perfect, there just need a few more words.

    Kingwebstar commented on Realm

    10-20-2012

    Another awesome poem .Sorry bro I'm Da KinG of alot of poetry sites .I'm usually busy but when I get around to it I'll continue to read more of your work.As you read mine

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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