Realm

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    Realm

    A realm of my own
    Crystals and stones
    Fossils and bones
    Tones of truth
    A personell sanctuary
    Where I come
    To watch the shine
    My sliver of time
    A cave of my youth
    Built of whispers
    The vices of god... 

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    Diffuse commented on Realm

    10-21-2012

    I fail to get a large flash in my imagination of the image you wish to create here. BUt again I think something is still incomplete, All that is above is perfect, there just need a few more words.

    Kingwebstar commented on Realm

    10-20-2012

    Another awesome poem .Sorry bro I'm Da KinG of alot of poetry sites .I'm usually busy but when I get around to it I'll continue to read more of your work.As you read mine

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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