i am complete

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    i am complete


    I am complete
    softly breathing i feel her warmth
    her arm draped across my chest
    my hand on the small of her back
    she whispers love into my ear
    and i inhale her like sweet air.

    we lye for hours embraced
    nothing in the world exist.....except for us
    sharing feelings with out speaking
    she holds my hand so tight
    and my heart wants to fill till it explodes.

    we play love absent to the outside
    under woolly cotton sheets rustled
    for love is but more then just a kiss
    but the passion felt with closed eyes
    and bodies entwined as one.

    she is my heart and she roams in my soul
    touching the senses of need and nurture
    she quenches my everything as i with her
    crossing the threshold and breaking the boundaries
    my girl,my world,my love.......

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    Vonn commented on i am complete

    09-01-2009

    thats so sweet i guess ur very happy. i understand how u feel and i love the poem. keep writin i would love to c more from u and i would appreciate it if u would glance at some of mine

    wordCollective commented on i am complete

    05-14-2009

    im going to borrow this...

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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