I Apologize

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    Poem Commentary

    I originally wrote this as a song before she passed away.  I wanted my brothers, sister and I to create music behind it and a friend of mine was going to sing it for her on Mother's Day.  She passed away before I was able to do so. I shortened it to a poem later on.

    I Apologize

    I apologize for all the hurtfull words I've spoken
    I apologize for all promises that I may have broken
    For all the misery I led you to
    For all the pain I put you through
    I apologize for all the things I never did
    I apologize for all the wrong things I've said
    For all the things I should've done to help you
    For all the embarressment that I put you through
    I apologize for all the things I made you buy
    I apologize for all the times I made you cry
    For all the times you wished to disappear
    For all the times that I wasn't there
    I apologize for all the nasty remarks I've replied
    I apologize for all the many times I've lied
    For all the sleepless nights
    For all the stupid fights


    Dedicated to my mother (RIP)

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    SaintStoney commented on I Apologize

    10-10-2010

    I have also lost my mother.. I can feel you're emotion in this one.. Thank you for sharing, Good job.

    girlygirl1234 commented on I Apologize

    09-20-2009

    wow this is really sad. the best poem i've ever read in my life.

    AlexanderCory commented on I Apologize

    09-18-2009

    Ok, I don't cry easily but this poem has me tearing up a bit. Such wonderful emotion packed into every line. I absolutely love it.

    justme8495 commented on I Apologize

    06-18-2009

    this is amazing ,,,you have a way with words..I also like the way this is laid out.. You know how to lay it all out so a person can understand your thoughts

    Chrisjan commented on I Apologize

    06-17-2009

    You have a gift for writting poetry. Please keep up the great creations you write. The imagary you share in a continued flow, is excellently done. Thanks for sharing.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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