In Hopes

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    In Hopes

    Conversations grow
    As that's just the start
    Wanting to know
    Where is your heart
    Am I in this alone?
    With all love lost?
    Or are you by my side?
    At all major costs?
    Growing more curious
    The more you linger on my mind
    Are these feelings true?
    Or will they later subside?
    Hopefully in time
    More words we'll exchange
    But what I hope more
    Is that our hearts stay the same

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    MrGee commented on In Hopes

    09-25-2009

    Very nice. I like the fact that the poem is concise and paints a good picture. I especially like the verse that reads- The more you linger on my mind. well done a 10 from me

    EricaE commented on In Hopes

    09-18-2009

    Nice peice, not your best, I like it though, keep up wriying because i really enjoy your work

    SuperDan commented on In Hopes

    09-18-2009

    I love this one. You write with a lot of passion and spunk and enthusaisism to the greatest of all of the human organs. The heart

    CMarsh commented on In Hopes

    09-18-2009

    Nicely Done! Short but to the point,liked it alot. In poetry its substance over length that is important. You have talent keep writing...hope to read more soon.

    Chelles

    09/18/2009

    Thank you

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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