I Don't Hear The Music

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  • Lost Love

    I Don't Hear The Music
    When we met
    Every smile was a symphony to my heart
    Every word you spoke A harmony of parts
    And we sang with the music
    And we danced with the music

    When we loved
    Every kiss was a hungry melody
    Every touch Was a chord only you could play on me
    And we sang with the music
    And we danced with the music

    And at last
    In the beat and tempo of the ending
    Our hearts wrote songs We never were intending
    And we sang with the music
    And we danced with the music

    But I don't hear the music anymore
    We tried to find a melody
    To mean what it did before
    But I don't hear the music anymore
    I don't hear the music
    Anymore

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    aggieprof commented on I Don't Hear The Music

    03-16-2009

    Neat. Unique way of expressing lost love.
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    BridgetBowen commented on I Don't Hear The Music

    01-23-2009

    Very nice! I love metaphor and you use it well.
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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