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    If you lost your child
    would you
    Want to lose your Life
    Question God
    Question the Fates?
    Or would you just feel the pain
    Let it surround and engulf you
    How long would you go on this way?
    Before the will to survive
    Became greater than the pain you had to bear?
    We think ....we can empathize and sympathize
    But untill you....walk down that path...of having your loved one
    Snatched away
    In an accident
    You will never know the hearthache ....we endure
    As we go on with life

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    Rhymer commented on If

    09-03-2010

    The severity of the pain is only known to those who have lost a part of themselves. Excellent piece. 10
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    Oblaidon commented on If

    09-03-2010

    Listen to Ginga. It must be hard to lose someone so dear. Nice write from your heart. :)
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    Musicmynded1 commented on If

    04-26-2010

    Because I hadn't it makes me to want to be that better father, husband and human.. and a poem as this just multiplies my desire... ty
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    ginga commented on If

    10-06-2009

    yes mufasa I have experienced the same pain of loss from an accident. May you be blessed and indulge in all things beautiful and holy. faith and hope are the key to survival... ginga
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    Lolee commented on If

    08-08-2009

    I have four grown children. I cannot even begin to fathom what it would be like to loose one of them. So sorry for your loss. God bless you...my sister.
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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