In Love

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  • Love
    • Adara
    • taken by a man who is not always around but is always in my heart

    In Love

     My heart beats faster every second that pasts
    The way you smile and laugh
    and look my way.

    I could spend my whole day
    just thinking of you
    and the way you look at me

    My heart beats faster every minute we share alone

    When we're apart
    my heart stops
    from the pain of missing you

    I've never felt this way before
    and that's how I know
    I'm in love.

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    Artie commented on In Love

    05-28-2009

    I've been there a few times before - there's nothing better in the whole world! --------------------
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    SilverGirl commented on In Love

    05-28-2009

    This is short and sweet.. you cut right to the chase in touching your feelings. You told the one you love how you feel while letting out your emotions in a timely, precise manner. There is no doubt that your love for this person is deep.. I love your style.. keep on going hun. hugs.. silver girl
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    kamaldahal commented on In Love

    05-28-2009

    Dear Adara, Good Expression of effect after falling in love. But little only my point of view poetic language is not representing much what we feel relax in reading in the time of reading poetry. Other everything is fine and nice effort. Kamal
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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