In the night

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  • Life

    In the night

     I can never imagine
    Whose life that can be worse
    People always tell me
    That there is always someone else
    Who's life that is worse
    I can never imagine who
    Or even how that there life is worse
    I want to belive that my life can be better
    But how
    How can it go from "Crap"
    To super amazing
    So I tell to all who read this
    Always keep an open mind
    For those of us less fortunate
    For those of us who can only dream
    For those of us who can not buy
    Luxary items, food everyday,
    Or even the occasional item
    That you use to impress your loved ones
    So, be it as it may
    Always Dream

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    BringMeBullets commented on In the night

    04-19-2010

    This is real. The power is amazing, and the words are bold like a bright blue sky. Amazing write. Thank you for sharing.
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    redbloodink commented on In the night

    04-09-2010

    I dream................ I liked this.... nice write with a great meaning.... red
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    Marsink commented on In the night

    03-27-2010

    It has been said that every [rain] cloud has a silver lining. Many times our circumstances seem to dictate the direction of our lives, but in our mind and heart, we must dream to be living on the edge of an awakenening that will change our life from the inside out. Dream on and write on!
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