It's just a little bit...

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It's just a little bit...

It's a little bit funny,
The way things worked out.
With you in the shadows,
and me in doubt.

It maybe ironic,
That I fell for you.
Since you started this,
Then said you were through.

It's also kind of sad,
And that's what gets me.
We were to be a Love,
To go down in History.

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Tarlton009 commented on It's just a little bit...

01-08-2013

I love it you words sum up what just happened in my own life, I am sorry for your pain but it has brought about this wonderful work of art I hope you continue to write you are very good at it, and I hope that you don't give up on love because everyone deserves that.

Mareann commented on It's just a little bit...

01-08-2013

Nicely written, ans shows the feelings that go with the heart when ending a relationship.... Good writing and enjoyable read... Thank you for sharing... Best to you, Mary

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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