Jerritt's Time of Death

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    Jerritt's Time of Death

    We went to the club at ten that night
    and some girl and I started to fight.
    We got kicked out and she got mad.
    She had her boyfriend shoot you.
    I cry so hard as I see you there.
    I wanted to kill her as he almost did you,
    but she just laughs and walks off.
    Now the ambulance is here to take you to heaven.
    I say over and over I'm sorry, but
    you just say "I love you."
    I say I love you too and please don't go.
    You say as long as I love you
    and never stop then you'll never die.
    I smile with a tear in my eye. We are there.
    You start convulsing and they start shocking you.
    I pray to the Lord not to take you
    and that I still need you and want you
    but still nothing. You get worse
    and the doctor tells me you have
    a slim to none chance of surviving
    By then, your mother shows up
    and I tell her I am so sorry
    and that if I didn't take you to that club
    and get in a fight with that girl
    then you wouldn't be here now.
    She just looks at me with stone eyes
    and I just collapse.
    I wake up to see you next to me and I smile
    and cry in happiness.
    You tell me that I was out for 2 days
    and all I could think of doing was to kiss you.
    It was like magic all over again
    You got out three weeks later
    and I thank the lord everyday for
    giving you a second chance at life.
    You tell me you love me and I tell you
    I love you too and please don't go.

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    Allegra commented on Jerritt's Time of Death

    11-25-2008

    Did this really happen? If it did, that's nuts.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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