Leaving You

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    Leaving You
    Leaving you
    I used to say thats...
    Somthing I would never do
    But now im here
    Your there
    And...I miss you
    I never knew it would hurt this bad
    Baby...
    Leaving you...
    Was the stupidest thing i'll ever do
    Because now I see
    How much you really mean to me...
    Now I see you mean more to me
    Than anything...
    I would die as long as
    It was in your arms
    I would give up anything just to...
    Be with you again
    Your my everything
    And when im back with you forever
    Leaving you...
    Is the last thing i'll ever do...
    Again...
    I love you

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    mmichelle97219 commented on Leaving You

    02-14-2009

    This one is just okay. It is sweet, but the conjunctions at the beginning of the lines dminishes the impact, and there is no meter to speak of. It is a good monologue but just an okay poem. Michelle
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