LOSING YOU

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    LOSING YOU

    THE HEARTACHE INSIDE RIPS AT ME FROM THE INNER OF MY BEING, THE ONE AND ONLY TRUE LOVE FOR ME WAS NOW LEAVING.
    MY TEARS ARE ALL SPENT AS I LOOK  AROUND OUR PLACE, WISHING ALL I COULD SEE WAS YOUR SMILING FACE.
    THE LOVE I HAVE FOR YOU WILL ALWAYS BE, KNOWING THAT INSTEAD OF OTHERS YOU CHOSE ME.
    WE WERE BOTH SICK WITH CANCER THE DEADLY DISEASE, HOWEVER I SURVIVED AND IT DOSEN'T TAKE AWAY THE EASE.
    OH HOW I WISH IT WAS ME INSTEAD OF YOU, THAT WAS TAKEN, DONT GET ME WRONG, GOD MUST OF BEEN MISTAKEN.
    YOU TOLD ME I WAS YOUR HERO A LONG TIME AGO,
    I JUST WISH I COULD OF HAD THE CHANCE TO LET YOU KNOW...
    YOU WERE MY HERO, BUT NOW YOU WILL NEVER KNOW.
    UNTIL SUCH TIME THAT THE ILLNESS TAKES ME, PLEASE SAVE ME A SEAT IN HEAVEN, A SEAT JUST FOR ME.
    FOR NOW I WILL BLOW YOU A KISS FROM DOWN HERE BELOW, A KISS FROM MY HEART, TO TELL YOU I LOVE YOU, JUST SO YOU WILL KNOW.
    GOD BLESS AND KEEP YOU IN HIS GLORIOUS ARMS, AND MAKE SURE YOU SHARE TO GOD YOUR WONDEROUS CHARMS.
    GOODBYE FOR NOW MY SWEET MAN UP IN HEAVEN ABOVE,
    I WILL BE WAITNG DOWN HERE STILL IN LOVE.

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    Mareann commented on LOSING YOU

    09-06-2010

    Oh so cool writing skills. Although sad, your words are right on target, with a most sincere meaning. Truly loved your poem, Mary

    kage commented on LOSING YOU

    03-05-2010

    great poem i like the wording and a sad story but a good one anyway great rhyme i am glad i read it

    Bobcatmoon commented on LOSING YOU

    08-15-2009

    that has got to be one of the most heartfelt poems I ever read..I pray for you blessings to heal in all of your challenges..brought tears to my eyes reading this

    mpjtforever

    08/15/2009

    thankyou so ever much, you dont know how much that means to me, my writing is a healing process that has taken over in my heart and soul and body. thanks again. love your friend jodi

    laydbak1 commented on LOSING YOU

    07-10-2009

    An excellent, heartfelt outpouring of a deep love and the commitment to loving beyond this world... Beautiful write, but I have one minor suggestion, where you say, IT DOEsN'T TAKE AWAY THE EASE... You might consider rephrasing it to the same tense as the intro line before it, something like... It doesn't bring me peace... Rhyme still holds up, and corrects the tense there..... Still a great write, very moving....

    uspslady commented on LOSING YOU

    06-14-2009

    This one almost brought ME to tears. I can relate but then again in a way I can't, for I have never lost a husband in this manner. I DID lose my husband back in March, but we had been separated for a few years, although we remained friends. His death came as a shock, and although I would never belittle anyone's grief, all I can say is it DOES get a bit easier with time. Your thoughts and tremendous love for the one you wrote about will keep him alive in your heart. And trust me, God already knew of his many charms...Your true love will be waiting for you when it is your time to go. I hope that gives you some measure of comfort. Without that hope to cling to, what would be the point of carrying on?

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

    mpjtforever’s Poems (14)

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    THE NEXT CHAPTER... 7
    INTRODUCTION TO MY LIFE 16
    MOTHERS DAY TRIBUTE 6
    MY HERO 5
    I AM ALIVE 15
    LOSING YOU 6
    CRACK ATTACK 6
    LIFE NOT DEATH 6
    TOUCHED THROUGH INSANITY 10
    WHERE DO I BELONG? 2
    HANDCUFFED TO INSANITY 6
    WHY DO YOU LOVE GOD? 5
    A NEW LIGHT..GROWTH ONCE AGAIN 7
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