Lover's

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  • Found ALOT of my old writes they will be up soon

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kinda a long one but its a good poem but ones have been done like it...

Lover's

Getting all pretty for someone that will never show.
All dressed up, nowhere to go.
Hair in dark locks, no one to see.
Lips glossed for the perfect, kiss that will never be.
Memories that were never experienced.
Tears fall from her perfectly dressed eye’s.
The dress of her dreams, re hung and stuck in the back of the closet.
Shoes never worn, put back in the box  to never be seen again.
Now a broken girl, dreams of her perfect night she was yet to see.
The perfect dance that never happened.
The walk that was never made.
She’s only dreaming of her prom that was never meant to be.

But what she thought about was not meant to be
The visit of death she brought about
It was yet to be
It was not her that was next in line
Even though she new she was loved she still made the leap
She swallowed them all
The whole bottle
As they all took her piece by piece
Her life slipped away
Slowly letting go
911 was called but they arrived just to late
She was not meant to come back
But what she was never told
Her date that was to show and take her to where she dreamed to be
And look upon her as his little queen for this perfect night
He lost all control
The tires slipped and slid only to come to a stop
With the swift visit of death he was the next in line
as her life slipped to no return he was soon to follow

Now they lie side by side forever and always
the stone formed in to 2 hearts side by side
it reads
Young lovers to die on this one perfect night
He was buried in his perfect suit
She was buried in her perfect dress
Young lovers at heart
For ever and always

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