Loving

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    Loving
    When will I find my love?
    When will I believe in God above?
    When will I accomplish all I can?
    Please tell me, where is my man?
    My days are so lonely,
    My nights are so sad,
    Why does loving have to be this bad?
    I don’t want to wait,
    Yet, at times I hesitate,
    When will I find the one?
    Please tell me, when will loving be fun?

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    Chrisjan commented on Loving

    05-30-2009

    Awesomely written. A lot of powerful words, makes a short poem excellent. The expressions of what's inside you, asking. But not hearing, what needs to be said. One is out there, i'm sure- soon loving will be fun ! Thank you for sharing.
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    painz commented on Loving

    12-17-2008

    just have to wait longer but he will come when you least expect it.
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