Mindless Abyss

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    Mindless Abyss

    Away in a prison cell
    A restless heart lies
    Confined less by the concrete walls
    Than his constant reminder of his downfalls

    Away in a prison cell
    A guilty conscience lingers
    Consumed by inner confliction
    Through the pain of self-conviction

    Away in a prison cell
    A broken soul searhes
    Torn by sin within
    Never which did heart intend

    Away in a prison cell
    A helpless life is yearning
    Longing for the warm embrace
    Of freedom's long lost face

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    Qualin commented on Mindless Abyss

    07-21-2010

    away in a prison,helpless still learning a lost embrace ;still burns still yearning...i agree with soulwriter an abrupt ending but good subject you kept me reading that to me is the accomplishment intended of any poet...Qualin good write
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    soulwriter commented on Mindless Abyss

    06-25-2009

    Ah, now you are not alone in that prison cell for you have left the readers a key to your inner thoughts and existence. Great flow of themed thought, I felt it could have gone on - however the poet always knows the right ending! Write ON!
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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