My life story

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    My life story

    I walk on a straight long path
    A pain came my way,I cried,
    I felt hungry,I ate potatoes deep brown fried,
    I hit some one in my way when I was in wrath,

    I plucked a red hibiscus in my way,
    There was no scent ,I threw it away,
    Then a lily I saw and thought,
    Had I done the same if this scent it had not brought,

    Afraid of a fiercely barking dog,
    I ran through deep intense fog,
    I was tired & started walking slowly,
    In my way to a crying baby I gave away a lolly,

    in the way saw a circus,
    Though I only liked magician chanting "ocuss-pocuss",
    and then came a political rally,
    Everybody was hungry in it from brain to belly,

    I saw a girl and fell in love with her,
    I badly wanted those 3 magical words I swear,
    What I intended to hear I thought I would get,
    And she said "you f*#k off" with absolutely no regret,

    I ran away being humiliated thinking of suicide,
    At the seashore then I observed high tide,
    Leaving a few fishes at the shore to die,
    Taking a lesson I ate that fish and watched american pie,

    And on this path there is still a lot to see,
    Just i have to stop at a few places and pee,
    No fears no regrets and with no expectations i walk
    Writing my story of life with a coloured chalk!!!!!

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    DuckieoutaH20 commented on My life story

    08-16-2009

    I don't think you have any problem with 'english' I wish that I could understand your prose in your native tongue.You translate VERY well.I read your words and I see many colours,not always bright... catch whiff of many different scents, not all aromatic..feel pity that shifts to laughter.. I am glad that you have chosen to unlock, and share these jewels you posses

    lips_unlocked

    08/20/2009

    thanx

    lips_unlocked

    08/20/2009

    thanx

    optimistic commented on My life story

    05-07-2009

    You have a very deep and great talent in you writing you really explained a life story you've had. 10

    lips_unlocked

    05/27/2009

    Thanks for the complement ,Actually I am from INDIA and may not have a good english as urs but I try to do it!!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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