my maze ,my reality

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    my maze ,my reality

    a world full of emotions are trapped in my mind

    i scream to scare them but they do not go away

    i turn to run but am met at every corner

    it is if i am in a maze that has no ending

    i run only to find myself alone when i stop

    there are millions of people around me and still i find myself alone

    i speak about my problems and no one hears me or maybe i never said a word

    maybe i only imagined myself begging for help

    it is then i realize this world im in doesn't exist then i begin to wake from my nightmare

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    nu2ya2000 commented on my maze ,my reality

    07-04-2009

    Nice!!!!!!!! I like it. And the picture goes along with the poem
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    dvusdreams

    07/05/2009

    thank you for the comment i am pleased you enjoyed it all my poetry has a picture that i think describes each poem

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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