darkness falls

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darkness falls

cool breezes usher bringing forth the night
distant darkness explodes blanketing the light
heavy fog rolls in smothering the ground
an erie yet pleasent silence i have found

in the silence my own heart beat i can hear
a sense of peace from the night that i never fear
the warmth of my life course through my veins
the feeling of serinity i can not explain

i glance up and see the moon resting above
gazeing down at me as if it were my true love
the stars are like shackles locked to my soul
the darkness has once again taken control

this guidence of the dark i dare not shun
for i have waited for it, it has begun
the shadows retreat into the saftey of walls
it finnaly is here my companion my love                  

the darkness falls

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Viper89 commented on darkness falls

03-12-2011

I would consider taking out "...my companion..." in the second to last line. Other than that it was awesome!!! 10 from me! It sound like a poem I wrote called "Terror" you should check it out!

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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