Next Stop.....The Light

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i wrote this poem for my uncle that passed in july 3, 2004. he was like a father to me and i was the daughter he never had. he loved trains so i wrote this so he knows that we still love him.

R.I.P. uncle we love you and always will

Next Stop.....The Light

The train of life

has just

chugged by

having you, uncle, as a passenger

to the light.

You will be

waiting for us at

the station.

Always looking

and waiting but never

wanting that train

to come.

You loved trains

and now you

get taken away

by one.

You never want us

to leave the first station

but you can't wait

for the train

to arrive

and to say

welcome home”

to everyone

as they arrive

one by one

at the “light” station.



* IN MEMORY OF CLIFFORD HEHL*

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kakurenbo commented on Next Stop.....The Light

06-28-2010

Nice flow, nice meaning, and really well written, I like it..

Sydney commented on Next Stop.....The Light

02-21-2010

this is really sad. it reminds me of my sister cat who died last summer. the poem has a nice flow

Musicmynded1 commented on Next Stop.....The Light

01-22-2010

I lk this coz i just lost my dad after knowing him for the 41 years of my life... and yeah, just thought id tell u i like it.

sk8ergirl

01/24/2010

wow i am so sorry to hear that i know you must have loved your dad very much

Dancer022597 commented on Next Stop.....The Light

01-10-2010

Im so sorry about ur uncle. U and him must have been really close, u can tell from readin this. Great job and keep it up, uve got talent!

ta commented on Next Stop.....The Light

12-23-2009

First, I am sorry for your loss. The poem is a wonderful and hopeful dealing with what none will escape. As your uncle waits for you my son waits for me.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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