On My Front Porch Steps

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  • Happiness

    Poem Commentary

    this was made the day before i went back tuh skool
    hope yuhh lyke
    read;comment;rate;nd enjoy!

    On My Front Porch Steps

     As I sit on my front porch steps
    I watch the birds fly gracefully in the sky
    On my front porch steps I look at the people walk past...
    confidently
    When I'm on my front porch steps
    I watch as the sun fades
    &nd the moon comes out
    Sitting on my front porch steps I see...
    The Beautiful clouds movinq
    &nd enjoyinq mother nature while she beinqs tuh take
    her toll on the earth
    Me enterinq a happy mind
    as I am on my front porch steps
    when I'm there everythinq seems so peaceful
    &nd the next day after school
    I will sit...
    ON MY FRONT PORCH STEPS!

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    GentleT commented on On My Front Porch Steps

    09-19-2009

    A place where one can relax, think and enjoy is a good place to have. Nice job.
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    cmlestrade commented on On My Front Porch Steps

    09-05-2009

    Very compelling with a perfect picture for your poem. Good theme, good word choice, good read
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    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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