Scars of Desires

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    Scars of Desires

    The opaque spiral staircase is winding it's way toward the sky, along each step lie the wounded. As I pass, each one pleads for a word or thought, or gesture.

    Now I stop, a fear to go higher burns deep within me. A certain untouchable desire fades in and out. Each new minute brings me closer to the step, the top...the fear.

    Seeking help only leads to pain, every person leaves a new scar for me to unfold and wear.

    A shell for protection becomes the only seclusion for a distraught and tormented body and soul.

    At last, one sincere shadow makes it's presence known to my mind. If I let it grow, will I suffer further?

    I have no spot left untouched by pain, the slow torment of her fury.

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    Marlys commented on Scars of Desires

    04-29-2010

    This is present day feeling for me not reincarnation. Actually it's a recent realization I've had and it's had a little bit to do with my move back to NH to see family and regroup.

    Kelstorm commented on Scars of Desires

    05-15-2009

    I'm not sure if you believe in reincarnation, but your words certanly do in poetry language. You've basically described the human condition and its seemingly endless life experiences

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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