Should I Stay, Should I Go?

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Should I Stay, Should I Go?

This is where I explain my heart

This is when you tell me what you’re dreaming of

What do you expect from me, baby?

Why can’t you say what you want from me?

 

I’d give you all my dreams, I’d take you home

But I can’t do this, baby, on my own

 

Now tell me please!

Should I stay... Should I go?

Is it worth the trouble to be... On my own?

Should I stay... Should I go?
If you want me to stay, Please, let me know

 

Crystallized visions of a dream

Forever in a second... Eternity

Love is expressed with but a kiss

So many questions, but answer this

 

Would you give me you dreams, would you take me home?
‘Cause I can’t do this, baby, on my own

 

I need to know!

Should I stay... Should I go?

Is it worth the trouble to be... On my own?
Should I go... Should I stay?
Would take me in, baby, would you kiss my fears away?

You ask all these questions, all the time

But you won’t answer me... Tell me why.

You speak of forever, baby, but how long is that?

When I can’t expect to see you tomorrow night?

 

I would give you all of my dreams, just take me home

‘Cause I can do this, baby, on my own

 

Tell me please!

Should I stay... Should I go?

Is it worth the trouble to be... On my own?

Should I stay... Should I go?

Would you ask me to stay, would you... Let me know?

Should I stay... Should I go?

Should I give all this up and be... On my own?

Should I go... Should I stay?

Would take me in, baby? Would you kiss my doubts away?

 

 

I would give you all my dreams, just take me home

‘Cause I can’t do this, baby, on my own

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sandro007 commented on Should I Stay, Should I Go?

08-27-2010

I really like this very poetic... it has a song kind of feeling to it :)

KING commented on Should I Stay, Should I Go?

06-19-2010

I like the song youve written. You bring romance and truth to the forefront at the same time. :)

ansari commented on Should I Stay, Should I Go?

06-08-2010

Its a beautiful song, the lines haunt me " should I stay.. or should I go" . the same questions have confronted us in our relationship. so appropriate. thank you , i like it . a 10 form me.

SuperChick76

06/17/2010

Thank you so much. It is a metaphor of all on life. Is it worth the trouble to stick around? Or are you better off moving on? Because you can't do both. Thank you for your comment, much appreciated.

SuSpence commented on Should I Stay, Should I Go?

06-05-2010

This was lovely and beautiful Super. And I can completely see this being a song, hearing it in my head as I read. I dont know who this is for, but if he sends you away, he is just another fool on the hill. To quote Bob Dylan, 'I'll let you be in my dreams, if I can be in yours.' :) ~Spence

SuperChick76

06/08/2010

Always love your comments, Spence :D

SuSpence

06/09/2010

I love your quick witted nature and your taste in music, sooo...we're even haha. ~Spence

dahlusion commented on Should I Stay, Should I Go?

06-04-2010

The gathering of honesty in this piece is covered with your heart beat: "Give me your joy with sounds of pleasure Give me your sadness and create their treasure"—this is poetically rich. Bravo!

SuperChick76

06/08/2010

Thank you so much for your comments, I'm so glad you liked it. :D

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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