To Tell a Tale of Life... I Am Here

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To Tell a Tale of Life... I Am Here

Crystallized creations condemned by nature

Lost in the vortex of a meaningless whisper

How can I name what is beyond nomenclature?

Plethora in questions without any answers

Convinced of a beauty yet to be dreamt

Deemed a fool by whom I once thought a friend

Beyond comprehension of a long forgotten trail

Traversing a road of long forgotten despair

 

Directions given but there’s no where to go

Promises made by the silent vows foretold

Weight bearing down like a dark repression

Depression, transgressions to comprehend

No comprehension, no understanding at all

How can I, with the weight of all that is lost?

Transcending through time, a sunset to create

Indescribable beauty, darkening until all can fade

 

A painting of life of the most perfect of detail

Conceived by a thought, idea, the seed of tales

Ancient by existence, newly created by thought

Futures foretold, changed by ourselves at what cost?

Instilled within me to carry my words, my burden

A battle to be fought for such a life I cannot defend

Life must end if ever the battle to cease, cannot be won

Know I am here as I always have been. Though you are gone

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gregster commented on To Tell a Tale of Life... I Am Here

05-25-2010

life or he lost the battle never you....great poem

SuperChick76

05/27/2010

Thanks glad you liked it. :)

winterkou commented on To Tell a Tale of Life... I Am Here

05-20-2010

That was an amazing write enjoyed it very much. good job

SuperChick76

05/20/2010

thank you so much for your opinion always appreciated

Ninjaboy commented on To Tell a Tale of Life... I Am Here

05-19-2010

i like it......... thats all i have to say about this... good job, keep writing

SuperChick76

05/20/2010

thanks, ninja, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Rygar commented on To Tell a Tale of Life... I Am Here

05-19-2010

your writing is becoming more and more Lynxical.. or Altairious... either way its a amazing write. very well done Super...

SuperChick76

05/20/2010

Well, thanks for the compliment anyways, though I am not lynxical..... or altairish...... lol, thanks. I always appreciate you taking the time to read. :D

jj1562 commented on To Tell a Tale of Life... I Am Here

05-19-2010

amazing, great, confusing, meaningful, oximoronic, understandable need i say more?

SuperChick76

05/20/2010

Thank you so much for your comment, much appreciated.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.