silly lil' nightmares

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    old skool ...written like 10 years ago ...maybe 7 or 8 ...idk.

    silly lil' nightmares
    as you have read for so many years
    i have filled an ocean crying these tears
    just like Alice i am lost in a land
    lost 'till you find me and reach out your hand
    now you are hear and i am finding my way
      the light in a child's room at the end of the day
    you are my heart, you are my soul
    being next to you forever is my only goal

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    redbloodink commented on silly lil' nightmares

    12-03-2009

    wow truly a nice write.... I ask Jesus to hold me every day... I would like a woman companion again.... But I want it to be as real as it ever can be.... BLESSINGS...... Red
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    cliftondurant commented on silly lil' nightmares

    07-29-2009

    Sound like true love it last and last if two people love one another
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    famous commented on silly lil' nightmares

    04-27-2009

    You are young and full of fear. Be still and write with all there is inside you. You have a lot to say 7.5
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    WordSlinger commented on silly lil' nightmares

    03-24-2009

    I rated the poem a (9) The title needs to be rated 20, nice one
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    SEVEN commented on silly lil' nightmares

    03-11-2009

    gurl i hope to fine me a woman to read that poem too... it sound like the one i let get away...dang two thumbs up^^
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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