bravery beats the coward

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    bravery beats the coward
    the ocean fills ones heart as deep as i love thee
    floods of desparation bring chaos from the sea
    in turn our love was tempted by sirens of self destruction
    should in time i stay with thee to flee from self extraction?
    the flood gates have stranded me fore i am indesicive
    the one thing i know is to hold and be possesive
    but letting go ,and you going is a leap and your not stepping
    say to me youll do whatever i need and the ocean wont stop letting

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    redbloodink commented on bravery beats the coward

    12-22-2009

    I gave this a 10........ not that points matter they sure don't make a great write red
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    redbloodink commented on bravery beats the coward

    12-22-2009

    I just like short writes' like this packed with over-whelming emotion...... red
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    qp commented on bravery beats the coward

    03-02-2009

    "jadeinblu",you obviously are a great poet, honest, emotional, and bold. thankyou for sharing. www.preetworks.com, nyc peace qp
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    writerspassion commented on bravery beats the coward

    01-23-2009

    very well put!! Lve the emotions
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    fastdetailer commented on bravery beats the coward

    01-05-2009

    very beutiful and you'r not bad either
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